The Obscure Spring Torrent
There is a peculiar tragedy to the obscure spring torrent. It burns with the cold fire of renewal, yet it knows it will be forgotten. It rages for a week, perhaps two, fueled by the temperamental tantrum of the vernal equinox. Then, as the buds break and the dogwoods bloom, the torrent simply ceases. The rocks that were its bed grow dry, then dusty. The pool where a salamander laid its eggs shrinks to a mud puddle, then a cracked mirror. A hiker passing in July will see only a dry gulch choked with dead leaves and wonder what madness possessed the surveyor who once marked a dashed blue line here. The torrent leaves no permanent scar, only the memory of a sound that no longer exists.
From the opening lines, it's clear that the poet is on a mission to explore the hidden places of the human experience, where the lines between reality and metaphor blur like the edges of a spring flood. The language is economical, yet richly evocative, conjuring landscapes that are at once familiar and strange. the obscure spring torrent